Blog 1 : Expressions of masculinity

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  1. You’ve identified the societal pressures and expectations that shape the characters’ experiences and how these pressures are reinforced by institutions like family, schools, and media. To strengthen your reflection, consider providing more specific examples from both the text and the film to illustrate the points you’re making about masculinity. Direct quotes or detailed descriptions of key scenes would enhance your argument and demonstrate a deeper engagement with the material. Additionally, be mindful of the structure and flow of your essay; the third paragraph feels incomplete and could be developed further to provide a stronger analysis of the characters’ interactions with their environments.

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